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A Drawing That Changed Along With Me

Updated: Nov 25

This drawing, now titled Memories of an Ageless Expanse, nearly didn't see the light of day. Despite becoming one of my favorite things I've made in recent years, there was a moment when I was seriously questioning whether or not to clean up the line art and do color. I ended up making some pretty huge revisions in order to keep my enthusiasm going and get it across the finish line, and I'm glad I did.


I'll focus on the drawing itself today and then talk about color in a dedicated post later. So I'll start by sharing the final ink art and then chat through the series of edits (as well as some changes in my art process) so you can see what this one had to go through to reach its final form.


Surreal image of a large robotic head entwined with cables above a futuristic cityscape, set against a starry sky with moons. Monochrome tones.
Final ink art

Memories of an Ageless Expanse was the fourth in a series of six small drawings I did this year on 5.5" x 8.5" paper (I talked about all six of those drawings in a dedicated post last month), and it marked a transition in my drawing style from a chunkier, looser style into an approach with more detail and crosshatching.


The two drawings I did immediately after Memories had a very different feel than this. I was excited about that new direction, and the result was this one ended up feeling a little... erm, plain? But I also loved the general imagery in it, so I found myself in a bit of a dilemma: should I spend time finishing color for a piece that isn't a representation of my new drawing style? Or should I just allow an image that I was excited about to slip into the dust bin?


To see how far this one had to travel, here's the original pencil drawing.


Cyborg woman with mechanical parts intertwined with industrial pipes, against a backdrop of factories and smoke. Surreal and intricate.
Original pencil drawing

You can probably already see some huge differences between this and the final ink, not just in the overall level of detail but especially in the woman's head and face. I did the initial drawing quickly and honestly kind of rushed it, and then when I came back with fresh eyes I saw several areas for improvement.


So I initially inked this the old-fashioned way – with brushes and a crow quill on the actual pencil drawing. But then I made some significant edits in Photoshop to get her head and face to look better. So, here's a look at both versions: the first is the original ink scan, the second is the edits.


Cyborg with long hair and circuit-like details. Abstract, black and white lines create a futuristic, intertwined design with circular elements.
Detail of the original ink

Cybernetic woman with intricate machinery integrated into her profile, set against a backdrop of abstract lines and circular patterns.
Detail of the revised ink

So this was a little better, but two important things happened at this point: in my new drawings, I started using a mechanical pencil with a finer point to dial in the details and cross-hatching. I also bought an iPad and started inking my drawings digitally.


Any digital drawings I did prior to this (as on Moments After the End) were done with a plastic Wacom Intuos tablet, the kind that basically functions like a mouse. So prior to the iPad, I had never done any drawing directly on a screen.


But I loved the iPad. I actually loved it way more than I expected. And a combination of the finer mechanical pencil for the drawings and using the iPad for ink caused my next drawing to have a very different feel from this one. For reference, here's what that one looks like (keep in mind this drawing is the same exact size as Memories):


A horned figure with a lantern, birds, and scythe dominates above a medieval cityscape and factories. Wings with "XIII" above evoke a mythical scene.

So, yeah...way more detail and hatching lines in there.


Feeling uncomfortable with how chunky Memories felt by comparison, I decided to completely re-ink it on the iPad. I knew this wouldn't be 100% effective because the original drawing wasn't made with the fine-point mechanical pencil, but I believed it would still help, and it did.


Here's another look at the final ink version done on the iPad (which, if you're counting, is actually the third version of the ink) along with a couple comparison images.


Surreal image of a giant cyborg head surrounded by industrial buildings and vines. Dark tones convey a futuristic, dystopian mood.
Final ink

Futuristic cyborg with mechanical features integrated into long hair, surrounded by abstract shapes on a beige background; intricate design.
Detail of ink work on Wacom Intuos tablet
Abstract drawing of a person with mechanical features and flowing hair, set against a pale pink background, evokes a futuristic mood.
Detail of final ink on iPad
Abstract drawing with large leaves intertwined with industrial pipes and structures in black ink on a light background.
Detail of ink work on Wacom Intuos tablet
Intricate black and white illustration of leaves intertwined with pipes and industrial structures, creating a contrast between nature and machinery.
Detail of final ink on iPad

That iPad version restored enough of my enthusiasm for the piece to feel good going into color.


On a side note – all of this demonstrates an odd by-product of my process where the ink and color stages lag behind the pencil drawings. And because I'm always pushing myself to improve my abilities on new art, I often notice room for improvement when I come back to a drawing to do ink and color.


And that was certainly true for Memories of an Ageless Expanse. Color is done now (I'll talk about that soon in its own post) and I'm very happy I stuck with it. I'll always remember it as a pivot point into a new creative style for me.


I'll leave you with some comparison images of the original pen and ink work I did on paper and the final ink work I did on the iPad. Thanks for being here.



I share process videos, sketches, and behind-the-scenes work as new pieces take shape. If you'd like to see the next stages of this world as they’re built, you can find me here:


Surreal artwork of a woman with mechanical features integrated into a cityscape. Pipes, foliage, and buildings blend into her. Monochrome style.
A cybernetic figure with long hair amid a mechanical cityscape. Tubes connect to structures, with foliage in the foreground. Moonlit sky.
A cybernetic woman with intricate mechanical features, set against a dystopian background. Her expression is contemplative. Black and white art.
Cybergothic artwork: A woman's face with mechanical elements intertwined. Background shows moons and industrial structures. Monochrome with a somber mood.

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Nov 05

It's so cool to catch a glimpse of your creative process

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